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No Need For Replacements by ~deccus:icondeccus:


©2005-2009 ~deccus
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I hate Noike. If ever there was a Mary Sue character, she's it. Anyone who has seen the Tenchi OVA 3 and +1 can probably agree with me.
For those of you that haven't seen it, let me run off a few things that make her as bad as any godmoding fanfiction character.

She's royalty, having been adopted by Ayeka and Sasami's grandmother, Seto.
She is arranged to marry Tenchi by Seto, making her his "official" fiance.
She can cook as good as Sasami.
She helps Tenchi in the fields.
She nurses Tenchi to health when he falls ill.
She can stop any and all arguments between the other characters by merely being present.
She has bigger breasts than any of the other characters.
She is also assimilated with the female half of Kagato. Tenchi killed the MALE half. Don't ask me, I'm still wondering about it, too.

As if that weren't enough all by itself...
She has teal hair.
She used to be Mihoshi's Galaxy Police Partner.
She is unbelievably mean to Mihoshi for no apparent reason.

But I think now she's rolling in someone else's hood, and that someone isn't too happy about it.

Kiyone wasn't created by the regular character designer of Tenchi Muyo, and the man currently in charge of all things Tenchi, Masaki Kajishima. Kiyone was created by Naoko Hasegawa, one of the original co-creators of Tenchi. She wrote a few novels based on Tenchi where Kiyone was introduced. She proved popular enough that she got a part in the Mihoshi Special, the Daughter of Darkness movie, and regular roles in Tenchi Universe and Tenchi in Tokyo. But she never appeared in the OVA, and Kajishima introduced Noike, which just seems to be his way of saying "Yeah, that's kinda nice, but look at MY version." Someone was a little jealous, I think.

Anyway, the actual art isn't too bad. Looks too stiff for me, but I don't know how to do better. I might redo the lineart if or when I shade it. I didn't shade this version because my shading was teh suxx0rs, and I thought I'd spare your eyes the pain.

The background is the inside of Tenchi's house. I didn't make it, though.

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:iconronald-mack:
Wait... she has the biggest breasts?
Your arguments are refuted.

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:iconvixielamenta:
SMACK THAT BITCH UP.
:iconussrman45:
Nice, just decked that bitch across the face.

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:iconnightmaredragon:
I saw that stupid OVA 3 and the OVA series would have been better off ending at that last episode with Ayeka's and Sasami's parents then continue the way the way it has.

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:iconezrabladerunner:
Yeah, I heard about the "New Girl" in the OAVs, Noike. Even though I haven't actually watched the 3rd OAV, I have came across spoilers(not all, but a lot). It's envitable.

I heard about all those attributes that Noike has and it sounds like something what would make a Mary-sue. Which would turn me off from any character with god-modding qualities(without being atleast somewhat likable). It's the reason why I'm kind of hesitant to watch the new 3rd OAVs. It'd probably kill the experience for me. Although, I'm trying to keep an open mind for the character, but there's already a predetermined dislike for her.

It's funny how Sakuya from Tenchi in Tokyo(I know it sucked and did not have the spirit of Tenchi Muyo, but still...) got a lot of hatred and slack for *just* being Tenchi's girlfriend, which Tenchi chose for himself(not put into an arranged marrage). Yet, no one even thinks about all the perfect attributes of Noike. Atleast Sakuya(without knowing she was a shadow used by Yugi) didn't have powers, was fairly ditzy/tarty, a typical school girl, probably wasn't a world-class chef, and quite naive. :shrug: I don't know, I just found that funny.
And I'm not much of fan of Sakuya in the first place.

Since Noike is the female half of Kagato, wouldn't a Kagato/Tenchi pairing be canon? :lol: I mean, even if she is half, that would still make a "Kagato", right? Right?! :head explodes at the thought:

Anyway, about your drawing there, that's pretty cool.
:boogie: Go Kiyone, go Kiyone, go! :dance:

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Kewl violence!

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I'm so glad I'm not the only one who can't stand Noike! A lot of people I've seen on forums seem to love her. Ugh... I've thought of her as a complete mary sue the moment I saw her! Kiyone was a much better character and had WAY more personality. Noike's kinda bland... no. Really bland.

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:iconnocturned85:
Oh man... that is so freakin' true, I was thinking Mary-Sue when I was watching those episodes. I know they were common in fanfiction but damn! In the series itself!

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:icongunitneko:
yes yes yes i totally agree. I HATE her i HATE HER HAIR CUT GOD DAMN IT!

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:icontsukasakun:
God i just watched the third ova today i liked it except for that stupid stupid girl. good to see other people dont like her either.

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